Sumi H. Inkblot

YES! An update! :does a tiny, on-the-spot jig: OK, Pol, did you even look at my previous two reviews? Or are you just posting chapters you wrote a while ago? ...

OK. This reminds me a lot of some of the old stories that I found on Word, and you have the same mistakes as I had: For one thing, you're ...

LOL. Interesting- I'd like to see how this ties with Khor. Since I'm first, I'm honorbound :coughnot: to be the grammar nazi. And I've had a bad day, so I'm ...

In total agreement with Brad here, and on a somewhat nonsensical note, did you know that Galilee is a city in the Bible? And you didn't stick with the Galilei ...

Urgh- sorry about the wait. Between grinding my teeth at the Geezer and trying to stay awake I've been meaaaaaaaaaning to read this, and here I am....................... HAHA, you said ...

Sweet! I'm enjoying this so far; it kind of reminds me of Bleach. It brought to mind Naruto, but only for a second. :P I won't comb through it because ...

May I ask why you posted your story several times? I'm not going to bother combing over the story because by the time I finished, I could have found the ...

OK, read it through, didn't notice too much aside from what Myth pointed out. You should put the prince's thoughts in [ i] [/ i], it's easier to distinguish that ...

I LOL'd more then once. Seen the trailer for Ratatoille? Looks good, eh? (and I'm not saying that just because the rat's named after my favorite stew) My only few ...

:echoes everybody else: I like the shhh...and yes, short is nice. Especially on funny haikus. XD Nice job not mincing words- I find it hard to not do that. :D

Hello Jessie! =D My first thought was this- "This belongs on a 'Get Well Soon Card.'" Which is good or bad, depending on your point of view :P My second ...

=D I LOVE it! :lol: :lol: :lol: I wish I could give an in-depth 'tique...but there's too much humor and not enough words! XD

I nearly missed this! And yes a little strange but that's what makes it good, original! I love the style of you're writing, its mature yet also quite laid back ...

the slurred phonetics of a flickering lightbulb hung like guilt over our heads and sent our shadows screeching across windowpanes and vacant voids disguised as mouths. Nick is most heartily ...

oh! Yay! More background on Jon. You've also managed to do this without info dump! I applaud you! =D I've decided to bold all the corrections I make and italicize ...